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Hope
by xbedhead


RATING: R for graphic violence and language
DISCLAIMER: I do not own the character of Jack Bauer - he belongs to Fox and 24 and I'm just borrowing him.
CATEGORY: angst, torture porn with a point *G*, post Day-5
WORD COUNT: 300
AUTHOR's NOTES: Well, since everyone else is posting tonight, I figured I would, too. *G* This is not beta'd as it's hot off the press, written as a distraction from finishing up my psychology article reviews for class on Monday. The whole thing was based around Jack's last lines and it gets kinda graphic up until that point, so beware if you're squeamish. But, like I said, it's kinda torture porn, but it's really got a point to it - I didn't write it just to put Jack in misery.

Enjoy. :\


Fuck. Hit me. God. Stop this and just punch me, please.

The stick makes a cracking noise as it slaps against the soft flesh behind his knees. He wants to yell, to move and physically follow his mind as it squirms away from the pain, but there’s nowhere to go. His back is strapped so tightly to the table that the skin where his pelvis juts out starts to bruise.

The pain he’s feeling is one he’s never experienced. Clubs and fists make a driving impact, boots are like dulled stabs, but the cane stings like a nest of wasps have been buried just below the surface of his skin.

And they know how to use that to their advantage.

The same spots are hit, instantly purpling the skin as the blood begins to pool.

He knows that screaming only encourages them, that they’ll go at it harder if they think it’s having an effect. But then if he doesn’t, they’ll only double their efforts in order to get a reaction.

He tries to twist away again, but his head is held firmly to the table by a pair of thick hands that drip sweat into his ear, his arms are tied agonizingly high behind his back.

He can’t move.

The thought enters his mind and he starts to panic, fighting the restraints with what little energy he has left. The resistance is useless, earning him only heavy-handed slaps to his face and another stick being brought across the soles of his bare feet.

The skin splits on the sensitive flesh of the arches, so he rares up and pushes a hoarse yell from his throat, trying to imagine the snow cooling the burn on the walk back to his cell.

They’ll come. They’ll come for me. You will. Please.

         

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